We are nearly at the final stages of finishing our short film, with only the voice over to write and record as well as the ident to add at the begining we should be finished by around Friday next week. After showing 2 teachers (a compact group) our film we got given positive and negative feedback, this included:
Positives
1. Good use of authentic location
2. Liked the aspects of natural light and wind used for example in outside scenes to create a sense of 'realness'.
3. Liked the fast pace music - suitable to the period and genre of the piece - Film Noir/Thriller
4. Suitable timing of around 1.5 minutes including title and ident
5. Liked the sound effect of the gun shot
Negatives & what we will do to make these areas successful
1. The title of 'In Cold Blood' wasn't recognisable - the writing was too thin and you couldnt read the red writing against the red brick wall it was projected on - make it thicker and readable
2. Make title writing showing the directors, production, writers etc on separate slides or only choose one name instead of 4 bunched up together - change the names to one word or co group
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